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Last year at school I entered a poetry contest. The winning poems all had to do with love and peace, as I recall, which I think is okay to write about - but they were also reminiscent of the fourth grade, so I thought they were a little undeserving of first, second, and third place.
Not that my poems were much better - looking back, I like what I wrote, but that is a lot different from being proud of it. Being proud of it means that I could spit it out, memorized from so much work on it, at any moment. That I could read it, myself, over and over and enjoy it every time instead of seeing every flaw.
I see lots of flaws in my work, lots of the time.
But I'm entering again this year, trying to reign in my generally aloof topics to something semi-universal (or at least capable of being universally appreciated). I'd really love if you guys would read some of my more recent things and tell me what you think? Either here or there or in an email. I know people have liked what I've read at open-mics, but the judges of this thing are school librarians, not Seattle teenagers.
There is a big difference. (sla.org.uk and needle+thread)
Plus the librarian told me that there is scholarship money involved, which had better stretch out of state, cos I'm in it to win!
Someone once told me that if your writing seems flawless to you, there's something majorly wrong. You're supposed to see all the flaws, always. That is the curse of us writers--we are never satisfied, haha :)
ReplyDeleteI'm gunna check those poems out. I'm wishing you the best!
Well, yeah. But they can be there and not make you wince. You have to like it at some point, or you'll never stop working on it. Like, you need to accept that it's done and will never be perfect? (AKA, I can read off the Lindsay poem by heart, and I wrote it last August, and I'm still proud of it even though I know that there are so many things in it that could be cleared up. I'd never change it now. You know what I mean?)
ReplyDeleteThat's what I think, anyway.
I really, really adore the war poems you put up from our english class, I think you should enter one of them.
ReplyDeleteThe only problem with that idea is that I hate those poems.
ReplyDeleteA lot.
Hahahaha.
I like them.
ReplyDeleteA lot.
Hahahahaha.
Can I comment with my new computer?
ReplyDeleteYES!!!!
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